Tuesday, September 4, 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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18.9.18
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Joe Thomas and I am a student at
Ohaeawai Primary School . I really like the information
you have made in our slide.
It made me think about using some of your information for me too.
Have you thought about deleting the information and just seeing the picture?
If you would like to view my learning, my blog is
http://osjoet.blogspot.com.
This is amazing because you used descriptive words and interesting facts that I never knew.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like planets? I am very interested in them, they would be fun to learn about.
Next time, you could to try get someone to check your spelling and maybe Use punctuation a bit more.
Why did you choose to learn about planets?