Me and my friend decided to jump out of a plane but we went at different times so we could see each other coming down. I went on the plane as fear got to me that I was gonna die. I was strapped tight to a man like I was a air mattress going to pop. I got butterflies in my stomach like a bullet to my stomach. I was so nervous to jump out. My ears started popping like popcorn in a microwave as the plane got higher. I put on my pare shoot then walked slowly to the door. Fear hit my like a punch in the gut as someone opened the door. I was so nervous that I was gonna fall on rocks or something. When I jumped out, it felt like I was in a tornado as the wind blew in my face. The people and buildings got bigger and bigger as I was falling down. When I got to the ground, I was relieved that it was all over. I felt so glad that I was back on land. It was my friends turn to go. She was VERY nervous but she still went. Friends POV: I was super nervous to go on the airplane but I still did it. When I got on I was strapped to a man and it felt like I was a piece of bubble wrap someone was popping. As the plane got higher and higher the people and buildings started to shrink. The man that I was strapped to put on my pare shoot and then opened the door. I walked very slowly like I was a hostage getting something. As I walked closer and closer.
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