This week for reading one of our activities was to create a poem about sea. This is my poem about sea. Hope you like it.
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, June 10, 2021
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Hi I'm Afatia from Panmure Bridge School in Auckland.
ReplyDeleteWow your poem about the sea was very powerful, I could tell that in your poem you were trying to tell people about how the sea is becomming polluted and the sea life is dying from all the plastic in the ocean. I also have done some work on the sea pollution and have tried to pursuade people to take further action in sea pollution. What are you doing to hepl the sea recover ?
Keep up the good work !!