Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, August 18, 2021
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Kia ora Caitlin,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have represented the two countries by using the flags. It's very bold and eye catching. The way you describe New Zealand is very descriptive, it certainly is a diverse landscape. Next time, I would encourage you to use a different colour for the text, this would make it easier to read for your classmates.
Miss Ribotton
Hi Caitlin. You have given us a lot of information about New Zealand. Isn't it interesting how the Australia and New Zealand flags are almost identical, just the number of stars is different. I agree with Miss Ribotton's suggestion and maybe next time, just check the colour of your text so that all the information you have given is clear for the reader to see. Keep up the great work.
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